Wowie, it's finally done! So, I can say that I am really impressed! You're getting better and better over every chapter and every one of them feels more logically finished than other. I'm so glad to see them all (almost all) get together and become stronger. And I may sound awful and absolutely not in the subject but I realized that I ship Edna and Lilli pretty hard xDD I mean, they are so close, and all those dialogues and details in the school... ok, let's just say that I was on the nineth cloud when Edna admitted that she loves Lilli xDD

Very cute scene with Reuben and Ignaz though, I'm really glad to know these characters better from your fanfiction! And it can be said about the investigator and Paul. Enchanting character story!

Keep going, I'm really curious to know what will happen when Lilli will be found (and where)! When I'm reading your work I always have a feeling like I'm playing a third game... no, like I'm watching a series! Want to watch more and more and never stop xD